For our writing we have been writing descriptive paragraphs. We were using the 5 senses and changing our sentence from telling to describing.
Here is my story.
Ran out of gas!!
Nathan ran out of gas in the middle of a dirt road.
Then Nathan called a uber but it was a fake uber and it was a kid napper
he was an old man.
Then Nathan called a uber but it was a fake uber and it was a kid napper
he was an old man.
The kidnapper took Nathans keys, id,money,phone. The fake uber took
Nathan to a cabin in the forest.
When Nathan woke up he was in a cabin in the forest.
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