W.A.L.T
I am learning to read and find the appropriate information I am searching for.
Here are three facts i have learnt so far about sleep.
1. During this first stage you are half awake and half asleep.
2. Rem stands for rapid eye movement.
3. During deep sleep the body feels heavy and the heart beats more slowly. After this the body moves back into a light sleep.
I think that the author made the all about sleep book so other people who wanted to learn what happens when people sleep.
Bye comment if you liked it.
1. During this first stage you are half awake and half asleep.
2. Rem stands for rapid eye movement.
3. During deep sleep the body feels heavy and the heart beats more slowly. After this the body moves back into a light sleep.
I think that the author made the all about sleep book so other people who wanted to learn what happens when people sleep.
Bye comment if you liked it.
Kia ora Ben, my name is Noah and I go to Marshland school. I loved this because it was very interesting. As I was reading this you taught me 3 new things about sheeps! It was very interesting the facts you have discovered. Also If you could add in maybe a picture it would make is better
ReplyDeletehi i am ben who posted this you spelt sheep not sleep LOL
ReplyDeleteHi Ben my name is Caleb from Marshland School. I did not know that in the first stage of sleep
ReplyDeleteyou’re half awake and half asleep. I like that you have lots of information and it is a very fluent piece of writing. But there are a couple of punctuation errors like lowercase i’s. I clicked on this posted because I love to sleep. Great upload Ben, keep doing what you're doing.
Hi Caleb i am the one who posted this i am Ben ok i will fix that latter.
DeleteKia ora Ben my name is Billy I am from marshland school I like the facts about sleep. fact 1 about sleep when your half awake and half asleep is raley cool .I think next time you could add more facts maybe.you taught me lots of facts about sleep. How are you half awake and half asleep.Thanks Ben from Billy.
ReplyDeletehi guys thanks guys for commenting on my blog they are all helpful coments
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